Most important challenge in youth's world may just be

 --valuing collaboration consequences of flow,  trust and brand  ID system- i need you to help write up a one-minute id statement of key people for the coming Ides of March Open Space

 starting with john kiehl, host of 5 day -Open Space MIT

here is my first draft 

John Kiehl owns the broadway studio soundtrack that finishes off (sound) of movies and tv, and is a mecca for meaningful music. His passion is to hub what good can be urgently and collaboratively linked in around stars (eg dreyfuss civics curriculum), music , maths (eg wolfram), systems conflict resolution (eg don beck), faith of every hopeful complexion, nature and mobile apps.. John can be quite a challenge to many who pass through the doors of the United Nations. His modeling of information concludes most of  human life is at an ultimate tipping point as the worldwide race to interface with nature reaches its final performances. All in all, few if any New Yorkers or Americans make more of an unique contribution to generations who value sustainability as 2016-2025 being the most productive -and exciting - decade of the half of the world aged under 30. As an alumni of MIT, he also owns a studio in Boston and is recognised by the segment of sustainability investors that exponentially values bottom-up and open intergenerational system designs

how would you edit this

in system dynamics modes, the professional process to use is:

does the write up communicate who in the world would uniquely miss what if john kiehl did not exist- probe by different segments what most makes or breaks their trust-flow  and action networks around kiehl

therefore writing up a short overall summary is often a long (recursive) exercise - a typical exercise starts with 10 distinct dimensions "whos" - what most makes or breaks their trust with what kiehl uniquely connects that the world would otherwise miss  =which 10 you choose is also in part a reflection of how much you know how to value john - especially his time the most limited of all resources when it comes to youths sustainable world heroes

however in this mail I apply a  2-dimensional shortcut:

 the one minute id of john which friends and I most need to amplify over the next few wees is to review kiehl contextually in harrison owens lifelong frame of sustainability in NOW defined as youth's most exciting decade being 2016-2025 

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and what would harrison and  amys peers most uniquely miss - which in her case starts with the practical matter of a with visa and scaling up invitations to be a connector of sustainable youths most hopeful and actionable jobs creating networks - such as the vatican-confucian wordwide youth community that maurice and she are emerging - practically lined in to human development/growth of a future city practice lab like baltimore close enough to turn the head of anyone left in DC who values Preferential Option Poor value systems as youths open educational and microeconomics right   www.economistuniversity.com